Monday, July 15, 2013

He said, She said, Everyone said

A big problem I found in writing writing is using the word, ‘said’, as in:

“It’s a nice day,” he said.

The problem is that it doesn’t express emotion and it can become repetitive.

As a result, here is a list of alternative words

Talking Called, Spoke, Stuttered, Whispered,
   
Answering Acknowledged, Answered, Replied
  Agreed, Disagreed, Rebuffed
   
Angry Argued, Cursed, Retaliated, Retorted,  Scolded, Shouted
   
Sad Sighed, Whimpered
   
Advice Offered, Suggested
   
Surprise Exclaimed
   
  Mentioned / Neglected to mention
   
  Mused, considered, pondered
   
  Commanded, Ordered
   
  Pleaded, Begged
   
   

LY Words

We can add more feeling using adjectives such as ly words

Ex: “That was delicious,” he said happily.

  Reluctantly, Sadly
  Angrily,
  Smugly,
   

 

 

   
   
   
   

 

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Sunday, July 7, 2013

The Unknown Road

Mark walked down the country road. It was a peaceful day with a pleasant breeze blowing. As he walked, the sky darkened and the shrubbery thickened.

There was something in the bushes. It was looking at Mark. It was hungry.

Mark picked up his pace. He needed to get back home, for the woods were dangerous at night. Things without names lurked there.

Fear gripped Mark as he walked the forbidden road. He knew he shouldn’t have taken the Unknown road but he was bored and wanted adventure. He regretted not taking everyone’s advice and keeping to the Safe road, and now he was going to die.

Fighting panic, Mark walked on. Relief was great as he finally arrived at the fork in the road. One path was bright and cheery. It had pretty flowers and headed for the town of Pleasantville. There he would find a safe life where he would grow up with family and friends. There he would have a steady job and be a dependable member of society.

The signpost for the other path said 'Unknown Road'. It led deep into Forbidden Forest. Beyond lay the Mountains of Uncertainty, eternally shrouded in black thunderstorms and crawling with monsters. From that path no one ever came back.

The instructions for the folk in the road read: “Welcome to the Crossroads of your life. Choose your path in life or be stuck forever.”

Looking around, Mark noticed that the Crossroads was filled with the skeletons of people unable to make the choice and died in indecision.

Mark desperately wanted to choose Unknown Road, but it terrified him. What would people think? How would he live? Shouldn’t he come back when he was more prepared (even though preparation was impossible)?

Something snapped behind Mark. A shiver ran down his spine as he bolted down the road to Pleasantville.

Mark spent the rest of his life in Pleasantville, regretting to his dying day not taking the Unknown Road.

Eugenics Is The Future

On a superficial level, evolution is “Survival of the fittest”.
On a deeper lever, it’s the adaptation of the part to fit the whole,
in such a way as to make the whole greater than the sum of it’s parts.
-- Dr. Slip Cam --

Practical men,
who believe themselves to be quite exempt
from any intellectual influence,
are usually the slaves of some defunct economist
-- John Maynard Keynes --

The year is 3245. Humanity has spread throughout the solar system. Technology has allowed the people to live easy lives. Everything you could possibly want was at hand. Medicine was so powerful that few died of natural causes. All seemed like a paradise. Except…

The future of humanity was at peril. People no longer wanted to have children, because child rearing was too much trouble. The children that were being born were suffering from various genetic diseases. Each succeeding generation was more and more dependent on the miracles of modern medicine.

Some studies have shown that almost 50% of the people have some sort of genetic defect. Some futurists claim if no one did anything, the human race would cease to exist in ten generations.

In the beginning, everyone taught that banning eugenics was a good thing, but now some people thought that it was the only thing that could save the human race.

In the capital of the Federation, the Governing Council is in session. They are discussing what they could do to secure the future of the human race.

Because of the importance of the subject, the council meeting was being broadcasted live everywhere. Normally you only hear council meetings on the parliamentary channel.

Councilor Tom Jones addresses the council. “If something is not done, the human race will die out. We must institute eugenics for the survival of our species. In the past, the weak were weeded out through natural selection. But there is no natural selection any more. Our medicine is too strong for that. What happens if something goes wrong? Last month, the Goober virus threatened our very survival.”

“But it was caught. Only 12 people died,” councilor Boggle McDoogle protested.

“That is not the point”, Jones replied. “What if there was an accident and the virus had spread? That virus had the potential of killing off 95% of the human population. That is what the scientists say”.

Councilor Delink Dormouse asks, “What do you propose we do?”

“I’m glad you asked,” Jones Replied. “We must start eugenics now. We can start by euthanizing all the people that make no contribution to our society. There are countless millions of people in our hospitals and in our jails and on the streets that are absolutely useless to society. Some are too stupid to tie their own shoelaces. Others will spend their entire lives in hospital because of their defective genes. It is best we put them out of their misery. There are criminals who are just unredeemable, no matter what we do for them. Society would be better off without them.”

Another councilor spoke up. “We should not try to save premature babies. They will only create useless adults.”

The discussion on the fate of the Human Race continued for hours. Each suggestion made for human betterment seemed to be worse than the previous one. At first, some councilors were arguing against these extreme measures. One councilor’s objected because her nephew had a learning-disability and she didn’t want him to die. After all, what could he possibly contribute to society? That fear was set aside when another councilor suggested that they would make exceptions to the rule.

While discussions were taking place, Mark McGallister, president of the council, listened but said nothing. Instead, he took notes and contemplated what everyone was saying.
Near the end of the day, people started noticing that Mark had yet to speak. This made some people nervous, and the room soon became quiet. Mark was highly respected and everyone wanted to know what he had to say.

Slowly Mark rose from his chair and said in a clear voice, “I propose we continue this discussion tomorrow. May I have a motion to dismiss the council? Motion carried”. Mark promptly got up and left. The rest of the council milled about, trying to figure out what was on the president’s mind.

In the meantime, Mark wandered about the capital city. He had been contemplating the issues of eugenics for months and all of his ideas were coming together. Tomorrow he would let everyone know.

Mark enters the local children’s hospital and visits the premature babies. In the background, he hears an announcer predicting a brave new future for the human race.

A worried mother comes up to Mark and with a voice full of emotion asks, “You’re not going to allow my baby to die, are you?”

Mark looks at the mother and smiles, “Not if I can help it.”

The mother breaks down and starts crying. The woman’s husband comes up to her and says, “There, there now Matilda. Everything will be all right. You must not disturb the president. He is a very busy man.” The husband turns to Mark and says, “Thank you Mr. President. Come dear. Let’s get something to eat.”

While performing his duties as a volunteer, Mark contemplates his plan for the future of the human race. This plan required everyone to give up their right to raise their own children and instead required people to raise other people’s children. The good news was that no one had to die for the benefit of the future.

The Next Day
The council is back in session and everyone is waiting for the president to speak. Finally, the time has come and the president starts his arguments.

“Mr. Buford, you suggested that the mentally disabled and everyone with learning disabilities be euthanized. Did you know that I was born with autism? If what you are proposing were implemented 100 years ago, I would not be here today. Would that be acceptable to you?”

Mr. Buford looked rather ashamed and said nothing.

“I didn’t think so,” Mark continued, “Mrs. Windermere, you suggested that people with extreme bodily deformities be euthanized. If your law was in effect when space exploration started, Dr. Dupree Humped would not have made his discovery and space colonization would still be a dream.

“That was in the past.” Councilor Windermere protested. “There is no way any such significant contributions could be made now. Almost everything there is to know about science has been discovered by now. Besides, most of these useless people contribute almost nothing to society.”

“Just like you,” someone commented and she gave that person a dirty look.

“From the beginning of time, people have being saying that we know all there is to know about the world. Never once was this true. Why should things be different now?” commented Jones. “But that is beside the point. The point is how can we save the future of humanity, when we don’t know what a person is capable of until they are dead, in which case it is too late?”

“Ah hah!” Mark exclaimed, with a shout. “That is precisely the point. We can only know what a person is capable is capable of when they are dead.”

“Dead people having children - That is something I would love to see.” Councilor Wordsworth commented with a laugh.

Ignoring him, mark continued. “What I propose is this. When a person reaches 16, we collect enough sperm or eggs to make 10, 000 babies…”

Immediately, the room fills with shouting. Some were claiming that we do not need that many babies. Others were asking, “Why 16?” It was a while before the president was able to get control of the council.

“As I was saying, we collect the sperm and eggs at age 16. We then store them in a 1000 separate locations. This way, the future of humanity is safe in case of accident. All damaged sperm and ova will of course be removed before storage.” Mark looked around while the noise ceased.

“Once the donation is taken, the person is sterilized in a reversible process. This will ensure that people can still have children in case of emergency.”

“What will you do with all these sperms and eggs? We already have a population of over 230 billion people.” “Only some of the eggs and sperm will be used, not all” “What if something bad happened and all the gene banks are destroyed?” “Weren’t you listening? The president said that we will use a reversible process, so we can still have children the natural way if necessary.” “How do we choose which sperm and eggs to turn into babies?” “Would people accept this?” “That’s better than euthanasia.” The general discussion continued for a short time before Mark regained control of the meeting.

“Please people,” Mark spoke. “Let me finish what I have to say and then I will answer all your questions. As I was saying, the sex cells will be stored in a thousand safe locations. When a person dies, their sex cells will become available to the general public…Please people. Let me continue.

“The number of cells released will be proportional to how exceptional the deceased person is. If you are in the top 10% in a category, one of your gametes will be used to create a baby. Needless to say, if you are in the top 10% in two categories, you can parent two babies.

“The top 5% will get 2 babies; the top 2.5% will get 4 babies, and so on. The actual percentages can be calculated later, and adjusted whenever necessary to produce an acceptable birth rate. Once a person dies, the number of gametes available will be calculated based on how exceptional they were during life.

“These cells are available to the public on a first come, first serve basis. When a couple wants a child, they choose two donors. The fertilized egg is then placed in the woman and the couple raises the child as their own.”

The council discussed the president’s proposal for weeks. In the end, the council passed the resolution by a slim margin. A committee was formed to create the categories people were to be judged on. This took almost 30 years to complete. That and the setting up of the sperm and ova banks were the easy parts. The hard part was getting people to follow.

500 Years Later
Five hundred years have passed. Everyone now accepts the system as a fact of life. In general, the people being born were now healthier, smarter and stronger than previous generations. The pundits were crowing that civilization had entered a new era of greatness.

A young couple passes by a large statue of Mark McGallister and enters into the reception area of the Mark McGallister Life Clinic.

Two weeks ago, the famous basketball player Freddie Fastball Sanders died. The couple was lucky to get some of his sperm. They had already chosen a famous scientist as the donor of the egg. Today the egg would be fertilized and placed in the woman’s uterus.

In the meanwhile, in the recently renamed Martian city of Marksville, a 16-year-old boy enters a Life Clinic to give his Life Donation. Andrew is very excited and a little scared. This is the moment that will mark his entry into adult society. He had just received his pilot’s license, and had already chosen his adult name.

Andrew waits for what seems like an eternity in the donation room, when finally an attractive nurse enters. The nurse just barely touched him when he gave up his goods. He would have to come back several more times, but he didn’t mind. He would soon be participating in adult-only games.

Andrew’s sister Pebbles would be becoming an adult in a little over 2 years. She would then have an operation that removed one of her ovaries. The eggs in the ovary would be divided up among the Life Clinics. The other ovary will be left as a backup. Once done, the fallopian tube would be tied to prevent pregnancy. Pebbles would then become the adult Wilma.

In another city several miles away, a gang of teenagers was engaging in a very dangerous sport. Each was trying to prove that they were the best of the best, the grand prize being the right to have their own children. Many have died trying to prove themselves but the youths were convinced that the risks were worth it. Parents and authorities tried to stop this dangerous sport, arguing that Mark McGallister never intended for people to have their own children, but to no avail. Too many people wanted to raise their own children, and if some people were to die because of it, then so be it.

The Man Who Would Live Forever

Millions long for immortality
who do not know what to do with themselves
on a rainy Sunday afternoon.
-- Susan Ertz --

You can believe in God without believing in immortality,
but it is hard to see how anyone can believe in immortality
and not believe in God.
-- Ernest Dimnet --

In the year 2058 Jamie McAllister, a ninety-year-old billionaire decided he wanted to become young again, and he was willing to do anything to achieve this. So he decided to conduct an experiment that no one seriously considered doing. He instructed his researchers to perform Total Cell Replacement Therapy on him.

All the newspapers had articles on him and his controversial experiment. Everyone wanted to know how he did it, and why anyone would possibly want to do it. What follows is an account of what happened.

How does Total Cell Replacement Therapy work? The first thing you need to do is to incubate a fertilized egg for five days. Jamie’s staff screened thousands of egg and sperm donors. They looked for candidates with the best qualities, such as beauty, health and intelligence, among other things. The winning donors received a million dollars, with the assurance that only the best would come to their life essence.

At the beginning of the experiment, the researchers suggested they use Jamie’s genetic material. They soon discarded this idea as a waste of time. Research at the turn of the twenty-first century showed that cloning does not regenerate DNA.

After five days of incubation, the fertilized egg turned into a ball containing millions of cells. The researchers then added a chemical that separated all these stem cells.

In the meantime, Jamie had been taking a slew of drugs to prepare his body for the rejuvenation process. These drugs destroyed all the telomeres in the cells of Jamie’s body.

If left in this state, Jamie would be dead in a few months, as his DNA unraveled and his cells disintegrated.

At the same time, the drugs forever destroyed his immune system. Because of this, Jamie had to stay in a sterile environment for the first nine months of the experiment. These drugs also destroyed the ability of Jamie’s brain cells to regenerate. This meant that all his brain cells would be dead in a matter of years, even if his body were intact. From now on, there was no turning back.

Jamie’s staff washed out all the preparation drugs from Jamie’s body. They then injected the stem cells into Jamie’s blood stream. At the same time, the staff injected Jamie with a chemical cocktail. This was to help in the next phase of the experiment and continued for the first several years of the experiment.

Once all the preparation drugs were washed out of Jamie’s body, the stem cells were injected into the blood stream of Jamie. At the same time, Jamie was injected with a chemical cocktail. This was to help in the next phase of the experiment and continued for the first several years of the experiment.

It might be interesting to note that this phase of the experiment was done in secret in international waters to prevent any government from interfering.

In the beginning of the experiment, there was no apparent change. However, at the microscopic level, things were happening. The stem cells were busy multiplying and spreading throughout Jamie’s body, like a cancer. Jamie’s old cells were no match for the new stem cells. The new cells were replacing old at an incredible rate.

This process was affecting Jamie’s brain, but at a slower speed. New brain cells were forming as the old brain cells were dying. Because of this, old connections were being lost while new ones were forming. Jamie’s memories were in danger of being lost.

To counter this, Jamie started an intensive course of mental training and remembering. The old saying “Use it or lose it” was very appropriate here. Jamie made a list of all the skills he wanted to keep and practiced them continuously. This forced the new neurons to create the appropriate connections needed to save important memories and skills. (Who ever said getting young was easy?)

Jamie was also exercising regularly and eating healthy foods. This was essential for proper regeneration.

After a couple of months, changes started becoming visible. Jamie’s skin started looking younger. The wrinkles were disappearing. Jamie’s mind was becoming sharper. Jamie was dropping years faster than anyone could possibly imagine.

However, the regeneration process did not go as many people expected it to go. In all his previous life, Jamie never looked the way he was looking now. Previously, he had black hair, but now his hair was blond. His skin color had lightened from almost total black to a pale color. His bone structure had changed too. Before, he was a heavyset man, while now his features were delicate. What was more, he had shrunk. Where, before he was 6’2”, now he was 5’4”.

Maybe the most disturbing changes that took place to his body were that things were growing that people don’t normally find in a grown man’s body. Also, those things that we normally find there were disappearing at an alarming rate. It was too late to do anything. Stopping the experiment would mean Jamie’s death.

Jamie’s personality was changing too. His likes and dislikes were different. His interests were changing. The way he dealt with people was different.

The New Jamie
Ten years have since passed and Jamie is in excellent health. New cells have replaced almost all of Jamie’s old body and brain cells. Jamie now looked and acted like just like any healthy twenty-year old. But a twenty-year old what?

From a purely biological point of view, Jamie had become a perfectly healthy, intelligent, attractive young – woman.

Jamie knew the risks when the experiment started. Jamie’s staff screened the sperm, but errors do happen. By the time they found the error, it was too late. They had run out of time. The staff had suggested that they fertilize multiple eggs to prevent such errors, but Jamie felt that to be immoral.

So the question arises: What happened?

Ethics
Let’s deal with the ethics of using stem cells in this unorthodox manner first.

People have been opposing the use of stem cells since the beginning of the twenty-first century. The reason was that when you join an egg and sperm together, you create a new organism. By using the stem cells to replace worn out cells, you deprive the new organism from full expression.

If the fertilized egg Jamie used developed in the usual way, it would have created a child, and then eventually a healthy young woman. This is where Jamie’s experiment differs from the normal use of stem cells. Jamie allowed the fertilized egg to fulfill its potential, which is why the end product was a healthy young woman.

From a purely biological point of view, we could say that Jamie died in the experiment. After all, the only things that remained of Jamie were some selected memories, skills and some cells old cells that would eventually die.

From one point of view, it could be said that Jamie the man gave his life so that Jamie the woman would be born with all the tools needed to succeed in life. The only issue is that Jamie the woman never had a traditional childhood. Can you imagine being born as an adult with all the skills, talents and abilities needed to succeed in life as well as the partial memories of another person, but without any childhood memories? Some would say not having a childhood is a blessing. There is no doubt that this will generate debate for years to come.

To Be Or Not To Be
Many people have accused Jamie of being crazy for carrying out the experiment. Almost a hundred years ago, doctors gave a dark skinned man a chance of lightening his skin. The reason is not important. He refused to undertake the operation. The man refused the offer because he considered it to be too much like death. If changing just your skin color is like death to some people, can you imagine changing not just your skin color, but also your personality, your height and your appearance, not to mention your sex?

No matter how the verdict comes in about using whole fertilized cells, the facts remain that very few people will ever try to do what Jamie did. As mentioned above, it is too much like death to most people. For another thing, advances in medicine have allowed most people to live to at least 120. Some people even envision a time when the DNA of an adult can be revitalized, allowing for true regeneration. So why did Jamie choose to conduct such an unorthodox experiment?

Is the old man alive with a new body, or did he die when his cells were replaced? Who or what is this new creature that calls itself Jamie?

I Think Therefore I Am, I Think
When asked why anyone would perform such a crazy experiment, Jamie responds in these words.

“I have noticed something unusual about myself for as long as I can remember. I noticed that I exist. I am aware of my own existence. That has been the only constant in my life, as I grew up and my body changed and my interests changed and my personality matured.

“Weather I am happy, sad, angry, sleepy or anything else, the only constant in my life has been the awareness of my existence.

“When I became a teenager, I found a book on Raga Yoga. One of the exercises given helps show that a person’s true self is immortal. The exercise goes like this. You are to imagine yourself as being dead. You could imagine yourself as being blown up or being shot in the head or being poisoned. What you end up with is a dead body. Who is doing the observing? You are. If you think about it enough, you will realize that you cannot imagine yourself as being dead. You can only imagine your body as being lifeless, but you are still alive doing the watching.

“Another exercise shows you that you are not your body, mind, or anything else you can examine. If you could examine it, then who is doing the examining? You are. Truly examining yourself is like pulling yourself up by your own shoelaces. It’s impossible.

“I am not the sum of my emotions because even though my emotions change, the ‘I’ in me is constant.

“I am not the sum of my thoughts because my thoughts come and go, and yet I still am.

“I am not my body because by body is constantly changing and yet I still am. Except for my brain cells, almost all my cells get replaced on a continuous basis. Are my brain cells ‘I’? That is a possibility since they have existed ever since my birth. However, the material making up my brain cells are constantly being replaced and renewed and still I am. Also, new brain cells are born throughout life and brain cells do die. Therefore, I cannot be my brain cells. Can I be the structure created by the interconnections of all the brain cells? That is a possibility. However, how do you explain the fact that the connections are constantly changing and growing and yet what I consider my true self remains the same? There is continuity and constancy in my perception of my own existence, even when everything else changes.

“If I am not the physical structure of my body, then what am I? Am I independent of my body? I am certain of it and yet I am unwilling to find out.

“The anti-aging regimes currently available cannot achieve true regeneration and I can’t possibly wait for possibly hundreds of years for true regeneration to be achieved.

“It doesn’t matter that new body cells will replace my old body cells. This happens all the time. It does not matter that new brain cells will replace my old brain cells. There is no real difference between human brain cells. Also, brain cells are forming all through our lives. What really matters is the interconnections between neurons. Connections are not important to your sense of self. Everyone gain connections as they grow. Connections are even lost with age and accidents. People have been using stem cells to replace worn out neurons for years now. I do not know their experiences but I am certain their sense of self never broke.

“René Descartes said, ‘I think, therefore I am’. In other words, the fact that I am aware of my own existence is proof that I exist. If I did not exist, there would be no one to do the observing. Do we have souls? Author Piers Anthony gives a logical proof that we do. In his book ‘A Spell for Chameleon’, a creature asked the Good Magician if he had a soul. The Good Magician said that only those who have souls are interested in such questions.

“There is no logical reason why we should be interested in souls. It does not add anything to our lives. It does not provide an advantage. There are many people who spend their entire lives not asking these questions. The Zoë tribe of the Amazon doesn’t seem to have religion. They all seem to do fine without thinking about such questions. In fact, the Zoë tribe seems to be composed of the emotionally healthiest group of people I know about.

“So why are people so fired up about the question of souls and spirits? We are interested because we do have souls. The statement, ‘Only those who have souls are interested in the question’, is proof of it. That is a fundamental truth that needs a great deal of thought to truly understand.

“So you see; total cell replacement does not replace the important thing in a person, which is the person. It is not death. That is why I did what I did. Okay, so what happened to me was a little disturbing to say the least, but isn’t that what life is all about?

“Am I a murderer because I used a fertilized egg in this manner? I don’t think so. The fertilized egg eventually achieved full expression, which was its original destiny. The difference is that the potential person did not have a normal childhood. Instead, it was born as an adult with all the memories of an adult. Is not having a normal childhood a bad thing? I don’t think so, because I am that person everyone thinks was deprived and I am perfectly content the way everything went.

“And new, if you will excuse, I have a hot date with a hunk and I have no idea what to wear.”

Saturday, June 1, 2013

Animal Names for stories

Here is some common names for animals in stories. I will update the list as I find more name. Also included are some links to good names.

Cow
http://www.buzzle.com/articles/cow-names.html

Bessy Bossy  
     

Dragon
- As a general rule dragon names should start with the letter ‘D’

Dragoon (Beyblade) Dronser (Beyblade) Draceil (Beyblade)
Draco    
     

Dog

Sirius    
     

Elephant
Babar (TV series)    

Ferret

Fred    

Goat

Capricorn (Zodiac)    
     

Griffin

Gryffindor
(Harry Potter)
   
     

Horse

Argo Belle Black Beauty (movie)
     

Lion

Leo    
     

Monkey

Zephyr (Babar)    
     

Owl
Oliver    
     

Ox

Joe    
     

Pig

Walter    
     

Rabbit

Bugs
(Bugs Bunny)
   
     

Mouse

Vera    
     

Rooster

Cornelius
(Kellogg's cereal)
Foghorn Leghorn
(Bugs Bunny show)
 
     

Sheep

Sally    
     

Snake

Slytherin
(Harry Potter)
   
     

Tiger

Annie Tigger (Winnie the Poo)  
     

 

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