Monday, July 15, 2013

He said, She said, Everyone said

A big problem I found in writing writing is using the word, ‘said’, as in:

“It’s a nice day,” he said.

The problem is that it doesn’t express emotion and it can become repetitive.

As a result, here is a list of alternative words

Talking Called, Spoke, Stuttered, Whispered,
   
Answering Acknowledged, Answered, Replied
  Agreed, Disagreed, Rebuffed
   
Angry Argued, Cursed, Retaliated, Retorted,  Scolded, Shouted
   
Sad Sighed, Whimpered
   
Advice Offered, Suggested
   
Surprise Exclaimed
   
  Mentioned / Neglected to mention
   
  Mused, considered, pondered
   
  Commanded, Ordered
   
  Pleaded, Begged
   
   

LY Words

We can add more feeling using adjectives such as ly words

Ex: “That was delicious,” he said happily.

  Reluctantly, Sadly
  Angrily,
  Smugly,
   

 

 

   
   
   
   

 

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